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A bit tweaking, just inspected the slide, and its a bit contrasty, but not as much as it appears on my screen


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As usual, your wide-angled images are always a pleasure to view.

Perfect reflection but the shadows in the clouds may be a little too dark.

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Atle, the composition is pretty much well-balance as I feel. My nit would be the exposure of the cloud in the water seem to be over from this scan. Maybe the slide is much better. Very nice work.
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Thanks for the inputs!! Personally i get a feel that it might "hang" in the lowest left stone, not having the right tempo towards the background.

 

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Atle...hi. A bit unbalanced i think cause of those 2 rocks left..distracts the eye. Unless you go out and move them...or God forbid ps them, what can ya do? The sky seems overexposed and its oversharpened...other than that its just fine lolol. Reflection is super.
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Thanks Paul, i consider the left stones to have a balancing effect, but you might be right... since they are breaking the stone line from left to right. And..yes its a bit over but the slide look better...since i dont scan myself, i have to live with it :-) this conditions was in fact ideal for me at this time since i had just got my Hard Grads, and was able to put them to a real test.. using both the .6 and .9 !
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a very beautiful shot. I have a feeling however that the horison is screwed, I don't know for sure (right side seems to be sliding down).

 

Lovely place, beautiful colours and a very special light. We want more pics of this place! :)

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I like the view here and colors, but too much high light on the surface of the river for me!

Thank you, Biliana

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Yes, its very contrasting, wich is not too appealing. The thing i liked best with the shot is that my Lee hard grads wich i purchased short before i took this... are splendid. I use 5 stop here. Keep shooting Billiana, and keep on with honest critiques.
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I am really projected nto the shot, here, the arrangement over a single diagonal of the stones is impressive, and is very well composed the way this triangle is echoed by that formed by the grass to the right.
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looking at your three latest uploads, I must say that your compositional style greatly interests me. I keep watching for your future uploads since I don't care to comment on a photo at the bottom of the critique comments heap. (I may not care much about photos visibility on this site as much as I do about comments visibility!)
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Thanks guys. I do have some problems with the lowest stone, my eyes get somehow stuck there... a little longer than i appreciate, but cropping it away is not a good idea either.
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Atle, IMVHO the thing that bothers me with this image is the second cluster of rocks. My eye starts at the bottom left and is drawn into the image until the right hand cluster which distract me from the rest of the image behind it.
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Thanks Jeff. I wonder if a left crop, taking away the lowest stone, (wich i find too dominating) and the most left one, could improve this, because the remaining stones might appear more connected to each other.
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