Shall I turn round?

Sometimes when I look at this photograph I like it. Other times I do not. I would appreciate knowing what works for you and what doesn't!

 

As always, feedback appreciated on this or any of my photos.

Like: unique pose. Leaves much to the imagination while being seductive enough to make the point.

 

Dislike: Model making eye contact would better sell seductive. Her facial expression is non-committal, so inconsistent with attire and pose. Light on her face is uneven compared to body, so her face looks like its in shadow.

 

Miscellany: Can't decide whether I like the angle of her arms, or whether it looks undone. Perhaps if she had shown just a hint of side cleavage it would have strengthened the image, too.

I just dont like this. Itsnot very aesthetically pleasing at all. just seems like simple snapshot. ... the pose or model hmmm.. nah not my cup of tea.

5/5

well a very nice bottom, even though the rest of the picture may not be working so well. The eyes are half closed. Would have been better either with eyes completely closed or open, and also with the chin higher. Slight mark from the bra on the right side which can very easily be cloned out.

Anyway, I definitely think you might want to try a crop with only the bottom half (with the hands included of course) and see how it turns out, specially in black & white.

Matt and Bilal, you have responded to this picture in exactly the way I was wanting. It is interesting looking at the ratings for this photo. I think if this had just been a bad photograph people would have ignored it. However, because it is a bad photograph of a naked girl, people feel the need to rate it.

 

Both of your comments echo my feelings on this picture.

 

Thanks to everyone who contributed.

Not your best. The position of her head and the look on her face don't help and there is something wrong with her eyes IMHO. This nay all be a lot of crap as my opinion often is. I think the undergarment could go and this girls particular figure could have been helped with her arms above her head with her looking straight at the wall. Please tell me to keep my opinions to myself if you choose. ;-)).

 

-Owen

I would never tell you to keep your opinion to yourself. Should I photograph this girl again, I will certainly remember what you have said.

 

Thanks.

sorry... coudlnt help my self from trying the cropped BW version, she does have a very nice butt. and like owen suggested, the shot would be good without the undergarments. right now they are dominating the whole picture.

I do like your crop. I have attempted to improve on the original. Please have a look at http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=2822540'>'Back-Front-Back' and tell me what you think.

David, this one has grown on me. There is something about her look and that wry smile. I must have been having a bad day. I retract my previous comment and give it a 6/5