Portrait

Any suggestions?

Excellent image!

Congratulations.

i think this is the most powerful out of all the images of this girl, you really captured the intensity of her eyes

Great portrait. I really don't see anything I'd change. It's all about the eyes for me with portraits and you have captured something here with hers. 7/6

Beautiful eyes. Do you think it might benefit from a little softening to counter the harsh lighting?

Inspiring image. Ed, you are really good at this.

good pose and crop. This seems oversharpened and with some strange colour artefacts from levels setting. I would try scanning it again and using a 1.5pixel blur except for the eyes masked out. you could also use masks to do a colour overlay to even out the skin colour variations on the neck