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Ray, I like the composition, sharpness, and lighting. I'm not sure which button will the color scheme trigger the viewers, but I generally like the result. ^_^

 

BTW, ran some E6s through the Mamiya AF yet?

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Thank you all to commenting and rating this one. Wilson, I just got an E-6 loaded on Mamiya AF and I will work thru it and see what's going to get me. Until I get my hands on my dream camera Mamiya ZD (the first meduim format DSLR coming later this year), I will have to settle with filming, developing and scanning -- what a pain. :D
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The composition and color are super. But there are just a few things that distract me. The light spot in the backround in the upper left is one. The crop is excellent, but I think I want more definition in the lower right, maybe if you selectively burn in the midtones to accentuate the triangular shaped bloom that coincides with the right bottom crop just a bit, it might accentuate the crop better and add some weight in the lower right. Then, the upper right lacks some detail in the midtones and shadows. I know I sound very critical, but this is such a wonderful image. The changes would be very subtle. Well thought out and lit. Of course, this is just my opinion and what the heck do I know anyway! LOL. All in all this is a wonderful image and I wish I'd have taken it!

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This structure, distributed like this in the space you even could present me in B&W! RE
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Special thanks go to Jayme for spending time on commenting the photo. I think I uploaded this one in a big hurry, about 10 minutes after the shot and I should have taken it slowly. However, critiques coming from seasoned photographers like you all make me feel honored and humbled.
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Sorry I'm late, Ray ... school year's had a tough opening this time around. BUT ... this is spectacular!! Wish I had seen versions I through IV. I love the tones and the bright spots/contrasts here. Wonderful!!
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