Joycelin at the fountain

Very good portrait,well done!!

Alec I love the D70's Color rendition,and your portrait of course too.

Regards

Critiques?

Great shot!

For me this is mnore of a beauty shot than a portrait. It should have been possible to find an angle and pose that would show both these gorgeaous feet. A shallower depth of field, or a quiter background would have separated the model from the background better.

all of these portraits of this girl are fine, but they rely on exotic backgrounds to be interesting. That's not what portraits are generally about. Closer poses and more interesting angles would be better

Guy, you only have one simple snapshot in your portfolio. In this folder I have more than a dozen head shots and body shot of the two models at almost every angle. Did you open your eyes and look before commenting?

This is another good shot. It would have been nice to see her other foot, but the position of her legs are great like this, so you couldn't have put her other foot on the wall.