Debki

Small manipulations in PS including toning and photo filters- and

little blurring- any comments are welcome, thx

Jakub,

 

I really like the background. It looks very much like a painting. The boat looks a bit overexposed, but it was obviously quite sunny out, so you're dealing with lots of contrast. I was going to suggest framing the boat a little closer to the left side of the frame, but then noticed the other boat in the distance, and assume you wanted to keep it in the shot. For comparison, I'd still like to see it framed less in the center, obscuring the distant boat.

 

Bill

Thank you for your input - I believe the off centre composition would be better but as you noticed I wanted to contain the other boat , too. this however is a try to combine both issues, any better?

Jakub,

 

Yes, I personally like the second crop better. Nice job.

 

Bill

I like the shapes and color, but I'm not too fond of the way the sea looks (blurry).

I know this boat. Is that the same one which I saw in Pawel Stradowski portfolio? ;)

Nice picture, I like this one. Only the color of water doesn't look natural. Looks like the sun was too strong and too high. Pozdrowionka

Of course it is the same boat- I was inspired by Pawel's shot and tried to explore the same theme, the same place; In fact I have applied a photo 85 filter (in PS) and did some blurring on waters (motion) and on the sand( gausian). thanx for your coment, and Pozdrowionka,

 

 

After a little thought I decided to switch the photos and the no 1 is according to previous suggestions and the oryginal imho is attatched to this comment

As you perfectly know I love this boat. However, IMHO this photo is oversaturated. I would like to see the original and possibly play with it in PS. Anyways, I like the composition and the place.