Skater Girl

Sort of a street, lifestyle portrait.

Nice shot, lovely smile, -Jim 6/6

its a cute picture and fine idea, but the light around her and on her left arm is distractingly harsh. you've done a good job with her exposure, but i'm afraid only more of a fill flash on the scene at a higher shutter speed could balance this out so that it is a compelling portrait. the cement bench behind her head and the half a person are distracting as well. i do plenty of quick candids at a scene and know you cannot always set the scene right, so please take all this with a grain of salt. like any effort to get into the world and beyond posed models (i'm assuming that here); the more real the better for my taste.