in the middle of the city

i'll be very greatful to be able to see your critique,your opinion

about my pictures.

can you add some comments

I would like to see the thing on the roof more closer. Also I feel there is too much empty space on the left.

do you suggest that i should put the sun in the center of the photo?

Maybe not directly in the center but definitely more toward it. But I would keep it in the lower 1/3 vertically, as it is now. The top portion works fine with me. Also, as I wrote previously, I would like to see the [bird on a roof?] more defined, more big a little.

I think this might look better with artsy sky colors added .

I added a other version of this photo...check it please

Well done - i like the mood of the picture

That's a striking image, very well done.

very nice, so atmospheric! www.charlotteaberg.com