A tree and two fields

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fantastic, the red in the highlights of the clouds is a little distracting.

I love the colors on this picture. Very nice.

This is a beautifully original landscape. Wonderfully seen and composed.

Great colors ! And the composition is unigue, love it !

I would like to see more detail in the yellow patch.

Thats a nice one, i only would have pointed more in the direction of the sky, to avoid the horzontal line to be centered. But anyway. Great Colorcompostion! I wonder how it would look, if there where deep red flowers on the right.

Thank you for your comments. I have tried to improve the photo according to your indications.

 

Patrick, on the computer's screen on which I work today I can't see no red in the clouds, but I have take a bit red away. Is it better ?

 

Erik, I have modify the gamma in the canopa field, to highlight more details. Is it sufficient ?

 

Stephan, yes I understand, but this was my choice to separate the photo in four squares, because of the arrangement of the tree at the intersection of the two fields.

 

Kyle, this composition is not unique. I have seen yesterday a similar one in the portfolio of another member (better than mine), and this is the reason why I have posted this.

tell us the true, you have paint half of the picture ;-). great picture the nature give us things like this. regards

Really nice composition.I think the trees is too centered,but is still nice as it is.

I personally like the idea of divinding the picture in four squares, and with this focal lenghts, I find the composition to have a pleasent equilibrium.

 

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Good conposition and colors. I agree with Salvatore.

Yes Guido, I have tried also this croping. I like it too, but all the same, I find the tree is too "enclosed".

Love it the way it is. Excellent cropping & composition, colors, lighting, and general appeal. Pat yourself on the shoulder for me please. ^_^

I really like the way u composed this shot... a breaking rules photo I would say. Isn't it? Anyway, I find the composition its self pretty original and the photo overall really looks like a painting to my eyes. Well done, congrats.

I think I saw last weekend a BW photo like this here in the PN. Was it yours? Anyway I like this one very much

This photo is wonderful and creative and inspiring. I would normally not want to see such a thing centered ... but here it works. I say inspiring because an image like this makes me want to write a screenplay set here. Hmmm.......

Great shot Henri - very well considered. Perfect subject for the square crop, which is always powerful if the subject lends itself.

 

 

brilliant colors and lovely concept. i wish the scan were a bit better - it seems oversharpened somewhat.

Interesting Composition. Great colors palette.

Henri, well done mate! You deserve the accolades for this one.

I have already seen exactly the same picture in a book, so it is not very original for me, but it is very beautiful and well composed. I think the original picture has a better composition compared to the rectangular version posted on this page.

Thank you all for your comments and ratings. It is the first time that one of my photos reach this amount of ritings and comments, and sincerely I was expecting a medium amount (about 20 or 30 ratings max), what would have since delight me. And sincerely again, this is not my favourite photo. I often prefer photos of more beautiful landscapes, but they rarely get the success I hope. But this is the aim of Photo.net to learn to have a better judgment on your own work.

 

Fernando. No, this black and white photo is from Rafal Rygorowicz. He also have post a colour photo of the same subject, very similar to mine in the spirit, and something funny was that at one moment the two photos were side by side in the "three last days photos" page. There is the adress of his photo : http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo.tcl?photo_id=2443329

Beautiful and original. It's not often that you see such geometric, sharp, and colorful patterns in landscapes. Great work!

Great!