Lots of Lines

Please critique. Thanks, Howard

Good idea, Howard. I like the white lines against blue window reflections. Perhaps emphasize that more with saturation? Compositionally, might work better to crop off some on the right?

Good vision to cature this image, well done.

x, y and z axis. good this is nice. i agree with the crop and the saturation, will look better. cheers!

Nice but doesn't grab my interest.

Wilson, thanks for the advice. I fixed the original based on your recmmendation. You are the man!

The idea is noce, but IMHO it needs more sharpness and contrast

 

Cheers

Yes, you have to fix the lines to be absolutely straight for this to work (IMHO). It's interesting and it's a good eye to capture it. I just want something more though - not sure.

I like a lot this geometry.

Nice one Howard

vedy good abstract!!!!

Hi Howard, just one more thing. I forgot to mention that you should also correct the keystoning of this image to look its best (like Joe said.) For the little suggested version, I went to "transform," then distort," until the vertical lines on both side of frame are parrarel with frame edges. ^_^

One of the challenges of this type of shot is to eliminate what's going on inside the building. Once you've read the lines, which aren't particularly interesting except for the slightly distorted section, you find too many distracting shapes in the offices themselves. I do like the x, y, z axis idea as mentioned above, though. . . . makes for a nicely balanced composition.

I am a big fan of interesting lines. This one is very nice. The color, the lighting, the reflections and just the plain old lines make this very eye pleasing. One observation, I have found with the 10D, the artifact. It drove me insane for a while. I found an "Action" at FredMiranda.com (very cheap and very useful), made just for the 10D(Canon 10D CSpro). I wouldn't be satified without it.

Nice architectural abstract!

Interesting lines, superb graphic shot. Love it !

Regards, Fernand.