City Wall I

Please critique. Thanks, HJD

v.cool (useful comment here as always...)

Love it. Great colors and composition. Really has a visual impact. Regards.

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This is just GREAT

Oliver, Ken, Els, and Loft thanks for the kind feedback. Els, you inspired me.

Nice composition and simpicity, Howard.

great!!!!

Love the colors! Great with a more modern painting and old window.

Thanks, Sarah

Now thats's color Howard.

very origina!!!! and well composed!!!

I didn't get it right, but I think there is something a little off with perspecive. In any case I got rid of that pesky white line in the lower left.

 

Wild color makes this work. =)

i like this a lot, if i had to nitpick, theres a tilt to the right, the colors are vibrant and nice, sarah underhill style :) cheers!

Cropped the orginal to fix the white line. Thanks for the recomendation. HJD

Very nice colors and idea, however you can see lens distortions on the brick (a barrel)

Anyways, I like it !

 

Cheers

Yes, there is a bit of a perspective issue. It's most apparent if you follow the bottom line across. A pretty strong tilt to the right.

 

Apart, from that, it's a wonderful composition and great vibrant colors. My only real question is a thought about capturing someone else's art as art. For instance, what if I had captured this same shot by taking a picture of the TV screen as they filmed it? Of course it wouldn't be as well composed.

 

At any rate, it's a very nice shot. I like it.

Now that's the way to use orange! Terrific shot!