children From here, I can see the top of your head

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From here, I can see the top of your head, she said loudly.

What does the top of my head look like from up there? I asked.

Hey, I can see the top of everyones head from up here, she replied.

Hey yourself, I said. What does the top of my head look like?

Everyones head has a different shape, she said.

Thats nice, I said. What does the top of my head look like?

All of the sudden, she started to sing. Hes got a cute little bald spot in the middle of his head oh yeah, a cute little bald spot right in the middle of his head

Excuse me, honey, I pleaded. Can you sing somebody elses song?