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Any comments? Do u like the pose ? how about the toning? Any other

commnts? thanks

I like the tone and detail of the woods. The pose is nice but I would try to bring her front foot out closer to the camera (bottom of picture) and have her lean her knees to her left a little. This would allow the viewer to start from the closest object (her foot, a little blurry so it is only a starting point) then move up to the right and then back to the left eventually making their way to her face. She seems a little tense to me which is always the hardest part of taking pictures of people. But I really like the backdrop, lighting and angle!

I only wish I could get slightly as good as this. Having read the previous comments I am also impressed by the thought and care that goes into producing fantastic images like this.

 

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Very nice look.... I like the left side being blown out...looks like you used a wide angle lens (28 I would guess-doesn't look like a 50). It adds to the mistique.

I like this as well, although I think I'd prefer the foot to be in focus. Still, interesting angle and well-composed.

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Thanks for your opinion. I have to say it was 50 mm lens as I was using a fixed focal lengh lens by canon. Thanks one more time and "see you" sometime at Photo Net

I like the tone a lot. Contrast and all this is ok.

For her pose, I think you should try to bring her right leg a bit mor in the front, and her left knee a bit lower (it would be more hidden by the right leg). To me, it would render the photo easier to "read" by playing more on the diagonal.

Her expression is also very good.

Lenny

 

very original pose, nice legs

Pose and toning are very good. Good model. She has the great legs for this shot

she's got the most beautiful eye's Ive ever seen.

Oh, good photo:)