LIGHT......A source of LIFE, or DEATH the way this bulb was hanging outside a house!!

any comments appreciated...thanks

Hi Rita. I was prefered you position the subject exactly in the horizontal center of the picture.....or better, center the shadow in the vertical line that split the picture into two halves. Your suject is very interesting, but it has too much compositive weight at left and nothing at right, making the picture to fall to that side. I think you can recompose it. Try it, the picture deserves it!!!!! Congratulation.

I agree w/ Osvaldo. Nice work.

I like it as it is.

I agree with Osvaldo and Sarah. Nice work. BR, Ilkka

Great eye to see this one Rita. I like both versions, but the original would have been how I would have cropped it.

It is nice Rita, I agree that the composition will have more ballance a little to the center.

anyway good eye you have! Pnina

Hi Rita, good picture, naked version of mine? ;-) I agree that a different composition, with the subject in the center, is better.

Great capture, Rita!!

Rita

...love it just the way it is ... the balance makes the eye jump aroung.

right away i saw the possibility for adding type or someting to the right as in those posters you see for "inspiration" etc. maybe even a Halmark card etc. in this case what came to mind is "you are light at the darkest moments" see the light bulb? see the dark shadow???

 

Rita is still sticking with the rule of thirds here ...Great work!!!

Dont change a thing. love it! I like how the shadow is in the center, love the color the contrast everthing! my hat is off to you.

 

Eric Lawson

haha, now i get it! =0) .......I guess so!

Un capolavoro di bellezza e semplicita'|||||

Molto originale!!

Molto ORGINALE Rita .Well done and a great Frame.

Regards Geert

Well seen Rita. Btw, this is quite common in our country too :)

Mi piace la capacità che hai di cogliere dettagli insignificanti e comporli in modo originale. Cgrts!

We'll, you've all seen her portraits. Now you know she has brains too.

I wouldn't go near that without my rubber boots on *!* I agree about the left weighted image, but it's great observation and execution.

Great frame, angle and lighting makes a simple picture unique and interesting. Great eye for beauty Rita.

=0) made me blush, FOR REAL!

this is a lively and exciting image as is. centering it is dull and w/o vitality. best i can imagine it, i like it even better than how i'd have probably set it up, in the rt. half of the frame.

Very nice image. I like such simple motives.

Simple but very effectful. I like it!!