Published: Tuesday 2nd of March 2004 05:40:20 PM
Shadow appears contrived (IMO), otherwise good.
Nice, simple, and good tonal variance.
Great!! "In expectation of the artist."
9/10 + 8/10 + dissonance = 11/10 Great photo, but for something that is so dirty and gritty perhaps a little too perfect in framing. Maybe move the brush off centre. Mis-align the picture frame. Put more of that stringy stuff around. The flow from bottom left to top right, along the brush, is just too perfect for my taste. The background tiles might look better at an angle. These with the angle of the frame they could then produce more tension and dissonance in the picture. Technically great 9/10. Aesthetic (8/10 which is still good)perhaps needs a few more jazz sharp and flat notes to make it 11/10. Thank you for displaying this image. All the best John
Paul David Athey
I could not agree with Olga more - superb piece of work.
77 Composition is great, light is great, feel is great
Grandissima cretività,veramente una prova d'artista!
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