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michael cohen

That photo was taken in cloudes overcast without daierct light on my 2 models. the soft light without shades help the relaxetion there. Still we recive strong impretion from the relationship between the 2 models.Thanks to all of you that will give comments and crituqe. Michael


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I can't deny this is a nice image. But I can't be sure whether I like the colours of the body and the curves (edges) of them - they are just too unnatural/plastic for my taste.
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I agree. The color tones of their hair look unnatural as do the shadow areas.
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Michael, you have such wonderful shots in your portfolio, i am wondering what made you do this ? was there any serious thought behind this attempt or....just ?
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Yellow is such a dominant color/18 percent reflectancy by some accounts/ that it can take over a composition.The texture of it also stalls out the viewer.The background, middleground ,foreground relationship does not flow even though all three, on their own, are very nice.When I crop down to just the flowers and imagine that yellow blanket under the lower model not there it looks better to me.Taking out a lot of the flowers above the top model and leaving just a little to the background seems like an upgrade to me also.Great elements though. Walt Byrnes
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Agree with the above comments on composition..actually if the camera had tilted down a little, we may also have had some nice OOF mustard flowers as a soft, muted foreground.. .did the photog try this diff shot??? Pity bout not using a medium called film, as the digits, as usual, got kinda confused here, converting flesh to yellow, and a white blanket to yellow and white..Guess film can think better than all them high tech pixels...but then again.. is yellow and flesh really such a good contrast or match??? Is this where black and white may have better done the job, as the poses are natural and quite artisitic..and a quite erotic..
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Dear Ron just for your information it is not fake

never the less I added photoshop work on this fram and I could do it better.

Some thing that I recommend very much to do when this technology exsist in our days. If we want to creat art the story that we want to tell weigh much more, comparing to how we did it. Still I think the technic is very importante the same as if we write a book, playing all kind of instruments, or if we paint etc we have to be profetional. I follow your photos in your portfolyo few of them are nice when

still some could be improved technicaly and than would tell your story even better. thank you for your comment. Michael

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Exquisite portfolio, Michael. As for this particular picture, as much as I like it, I keep wondering how it would look with natural colors throughout.
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