~Waiting~

Could you please give me some feed back on this image.. areas to

inprove maybe... what you like and dislike please ???

Nice image, I feel it was a little heavy on the right side. Perhaps if her right arm was up a little against the wall would help to add a little to the image. Nicely done though.

Her left arm is a little distracting and gives me the an uncomfortable feeling when I look at it. I am not too sure about your vantage point either. I think if this had been composed looking straight at the subject rather than looking up at her it MAY be better. The space to the left is fine for me.

I understand the comments on the composition, because it's not standard. The left arm is a distraction, but this is what I like about the shot. It's the stance, a little uncomfortable, allowing for the shot to feel as if not only the subject but also the viewer is waiting. Good work, the shot feels real, and has somehow avoided the commercial feeling of most nudes. ~Alex

I agree with Alex though... she is waiting.. she is at rest.. hence her arm at her side and one in her pocket. I do not feel that the arm on the left side is too distracting at all... but thank you all for comments thus far.....

I think it's an artistic photo. I like the pose and position within the frame. The grain works well too. Honestly, this is one of those types of photos you look at and think something is wrong, but then you can't really nail it down. In my mind, that makes it a great shot.

Thanks for you comments Mark.. I still do't think that there is anything wrong with it to "Nail"...lol... But still, I value your words and everyone elses. I was thinking about the one rivit on the belt that shows a bit of flare and the one above it doesn't. (to remove it) but I think that I will leave it all as is. I like the grain here as well. Again, Thank you all for your comments.

I really like this shot, the grain and colors make it nearly perfect to me. But, like others said, there's a little something about the composition, maybe a bit bigger image format with more space at her right would have help being less 50/50 as a composition, but great shot anyway! ;-)

I like this one very much, great tone and the grain was a nice idea. Congrats!

i like this. don't change anything.

Terry, I like this too. The pose is very relaxed and I like the lighting and grain.