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thanks for comments.

A nicely posed shot; but the starkness of the contrast and colors deprives it of something. I don't know quite how else to describe it.

 

A bit less contrast and more intense colors would make it a much better shot, is the best way I can say it.

I like the cold stark feeling, with just a hint of warm color, and the groups of horizontal and vertical lines. It's a tricky composition. I think I might cheat the horizon line and rotate very sightly. I also think ending the dark line in the middle breaks up the image too much, so either cut a bit off the left, extend the right, or both.

Tweaked for saturation.

I like your photo better before you increased the sturation. I like the starkness of the original.

 

shojin

i like the sadness that come out of this photo. the colors are perfect