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I really like this photo. However, I wonder about the horizontal window line. Perhaps it could be burned in a little? Mostly, I like the way the three faces play against each other.

nice photo. when i look at it, i mostly consider the circumstances of shooting a stranger on a crowded train. i guess i need to develop such boldness. i like how the two standing bodies seem to provide a nice border.

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