Parador II

Nice composition and colors. The smooth sky makes a good contrast with the white and green.

I fixed the sky from the old version. Let me know what you think of

this.

Its an intertesting balance between blue and white..but it feels flat..perhaps if you use a wider angle? and have a more focused subject?

B&W .......................... (-;

Ken.. am I hearing you right? OK... I tried it. It's not bad actually..a different feel for sure. I think both versions have their merits. What do you think?

Great composition. Airy. Thanks!

Margaret, I hope you don't take my critique/comments personally. I'm learning too and just felt the need to put my two cents in on this image. Ok.

 

I first looked at the image and felt there was something interesting inside the image but it felt unfinished. The more I looked at it the more I felt overwhelming potential for a kick ass composition to come out of that scene. Personally I think B&W is a better direction and maybe even a sepia toned image eventually. I would love to see you explore this scene some more for that prized composition with all the lines and contrasts the exists in the scene. I see something interesting in this image but I don't think it's "The One" - hope I don't sound like the matrix :).

 

Again I hope you take this as constructive critiquing/commenting from a learning photographer. I hope you do explore this some more if possible. All the best Margaret.

Not taken personally at all, I welcome well-meant critiques and suggestions for improvement! Thank you - and I have listened to both you and Ken -> Please see B&W version here :-)

I agree - they both have merits and this one is starting to grow on me ....... (-;