Dani e Linda

dani e linda seeking critique baldassarre luca

Tags: seeking critique

Category: Portrait

Author: Baldassarre Luca

Gallery: Portraits

Published:
Saturday 1st of November 2003 12:32:12 PM

Comments

Charo Diez
Hello Luca, I like the unpossed look of this shot, and the way the woman is lying on the table looking at what he is doing... But I find a little bit distracting what seems to be a neon lighting on the top on the shot, and the white line on the man´s shirt. Since you title "two studends one love" I´d rather see the focus on the woman´s eye.

Michele Perone
Mi piace molto per il rilievo che da alla mano e alla matita. L'attenzione va tutta sul punto dove poggia la matita nella speranza, inconscia, di riuscire a leggere cosa c'è scritto e ritrovare la Fisica studiata tanto tanto tempo fa. Prova a tagliare qualcosa sui bordi, soprattutto in alto.

Asim H.
i enjoy the feeling of trying to figure out what the girl is thinking. i too agree that cropping out the light above would make this pic even more "dreamy".

Luca Baldassarre
Two Students, One Love ...I'd really like to read your impressions on this one, thank you!

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