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Swinging - Inverted to provide context


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Exposure: f/4.5 @ 1/80 secMeter Mode: MatrixExposure Mode: ProgramCropped 8x10 print made on a Beseler 23C enlarger with 50mm f2.8 El-Nikkor on Ilford RC Multigrade IV paper.Scanner: Epson 1650 Photo (No PhotoShop enhancements other than adding the copyright notice and removing dust spots)


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Per a suggestion of Sam M-M, I inverted the photo to provide context. Good eye, Sam! The original is here Original

What do the rest of you think?

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I dunno Brooks. I like the hair-in-the-air view a little better. Just goes to show you though, how one photo can be two by simply rotating the image.
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I will say I prefer the other as well, because it is more unexpected and makes me look longer. I think flipping this way also emphasizes the leg rather than the face. I noticed the great contrast more in this one, though I think in the other it is still there, of course, just more subtle; maybe it has something to do with how the eye moves through the photo.

 

Fact is, I like to see it both ways; I feel like i've learned something about composition. Interesting!

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Thank you all for the comments and Sam for the suggestion.

 

I checked my negative; this is the way I shot it. I, too, prefer the other version which, technically, is the inverted version.

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I think I like this version better. It seems more natural. I think this is my favorite from your folder. It has a real 'kids will be kids' feel to it. Great shot.
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This version is lovely for its capture of a girl at play. However, the other version is great as a creative composition! Same photo, different dimensions - well done :) M
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The shot is full of motion and the inversion had supported it. Glancing through other comments though, I try to imagine it re-inverted back to its original. I agree with the comment that the leg gains some predominance now and the face is relegated somewhat even though it is the focus of movement.
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