tom t 0 Posted October 27, 2003 I'm sure it's a nice place to sit... but really you got a snapshot here... Let's analyse. You got an interesting sky. Actually the sky is the most interesting part of the composition. Unless you wanna count the chairs. Now there we have something... I think the problem is that we don't know what the subject of the shot would be. Is it the sky (then drop the rest). Is it the lake? (then drop the fence. And the grass and the chairs). Is it the chairs? (that might be an interesting idea, actually!) (but then they're not prominent enough). Is it the boats (also not prominent enough). So, all in all you had an interesting location and good timing (cloud-wise). But I think the shot needs more work. Sorry if harsh - you asked for a critique, right? Just my 2cts (who am I anyway ?) Regards & happy shooting, Tom Link to comment
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