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Help me to improve my pictures, please

I like the picture - think it would be much better if the model were in the same position but facing the left - parallel with the chain on top. she could then turn her shoulders and head to you - thus, making her face and hair moe prominent. Right now I think there is too much focus on the knee (being the closest to the camera). Nice light - great idea.

In oposite to Kimbal i find her position perfect. I agree only with the knee being slightly overfocused. But Kimbal, that's the price for neverending beauty of womans' legs :)

 

btw i Tore was in the port of Göteborg only once 2 years ago (i come from a country 2000 km far away) but i think i know EXACTLY(!) where the pic was taken :)

i find that the image is slightly grainy... however original image but the pose did not help her to relax, thus in my opinion the photo looks static and stiff. Maybe being positioned in another pose will improve image..Also black and white tones are fine.

I did some rescanning on some old pictures. I fixed some of the dust and grains in these one.

Thanks for your comments. Regards Tore