Mussels in the wall

by Vazquez Efren

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Tags: sea reflection seeking critique

Category: Abstract

Exif Information:
Model : NIKON D80
Date Time Original : 2016-08-06 17:19:46
Focal Length : 105/1
Shutter Speed Value : 1/399
Exposure Time : 1/400
Aperture Value : 5.0
F Number : 5.0
Iso Speed Ratings : 200
Flash : 16
Metering Mode : 5
Focal Length In35mm Film : 157
Orientation : 1
X Resolution : 300.000000
Y Resolution : 300.000000
Software : Adobe Photoshop CS5 Macintosh

Published: Saturday 6th of August 2016 04:30:00 PM


Leslie Reid

I love the colors and patterns here. My only suggestion would be to reorient the photo slightly--even though it is classified as "abstract," the scene is perceived by the viewer as a wall and its reflection, and that means that when the reflected point isn't vertically below the reflecting point, the entire image appears tilted. Reorientation by about a 10 degree clockwise rotation would also strengthen the impact of the waterline as a diagonal element. But I love the way that you've turned something that most of us would pass by without noticing into a striking image. Nice!

Efren Vazquez

Thank you very much, Leslie, for your precise and didactic comment. I will bear it in mind for next photos. Regards.

Efren Vazquez
Mussels in the wall Thanks for your rate and comments

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