Image 5

Took a different angle and approach as my daughter practiced her flute. Looking for

overall thoughts on this shot.

Hi Michael

I like your daughter's position and hands. Unfortunately the cluttered background behind the hands is a distraction. I find that cropping top down a little to the forehead helps for me anyway. Like her face against the window. Maybe a little too grey rather than B/W, more contrast needed.

I have a similar shot of my son playing flute, taken with fisheye lens. Its in my Offspring folder if you want to take a look.

Regards

Tony

Thanks Tony... Yeah I should have thought more about background, I was a bit impulsive. Thanks for the tip though!! I greatly appreciate it. I'll check out your sons photo as well.