alfbailey 2 Posted January 28, 2016 The dappled light against the gable end of the building set against the dark sky works really well! I would like to see more of the building, but I'm sure there must have been a good reason you not to include more in the shot? Nice work Gerald! Alf Link to comment
DavidTriplett 12,682 Posted January 29, 2016 Gerald, nicely executed. I agree with Alf's comments: I could do, perhaps, with either a little more of the building, or perhaps even less, in a tightly focused vignette? Still, a lovely image. Well done. Link to comment
aplumpton 16 Posted February 2, 2016 Gerald, you have captured perfectly I think the texture, shadows and light. I think it was Minor White who said that achieving a fine photograph is a work whereby your first attempt is not just accepted but the basis of further development of approach and result to further explore the subject. The subject matter is promising and i would encourage you to return to it (if it is nearby) for other views, for the tonality of the abandoned but resistant bricks and the invasion of nature on the roof. Link to comment
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