Light and shadow To John Peri

Very impressive light, but too much empty space.

Beautifully fine and elegant work Andrew, and thank you so  much for the dedication, I am very flattered. 

 

(not important Andrew,  but its "Peri", thanks again). 

Hi John sorry for the spelling its corrected it is important

Rule #1 of figure photography: No straight lines. Bend the legs, bend the arms, otherwise, it looks as though they're sticking out like tree branches.

Hi Alexander,

I like trees especially branches. Thanks for you honest opinion. Not many people do this.

Hi Andrew,

 

We're here to get constructive feedback and that's what I try to do. I like your lighting. You have it down pat. Most of your images are very well lit. Your posing is a bit stiff. I'm still in the process of looking over your photos, but that's what I'm seeing: The body has to flow, the lines have to give the feeling of motion. Most of your poses are stiff and they give the feeling of being entrenched in the ground. Get your model to loosen up and think of curves. Flowing curves. Hope this helps.

Like I said what you are doing is rare. Most people are just polite. I appreciate you comments and this photo is clearly not my favorite.