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by Arnold Wolfgang

untitled office building window empty shadow rectangular re arnold wolfgang

Gallery: Light & Shadow - Set I: Shapes

Tags: office building window empty shadow rectangular reflection seeking critique

Category: Fine Art

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Copyright : Copyright 2015 Wolfgang Arnold - CC BY-NC-SA 4.0

Published: Saturday 21st of November 2015 06:46:18 PM


Comments

Chris Hamilton
Chris Hamilton

Nice shapes and shadows, well seen.

Scott Tyrrell

Very pleasing shot indeed. I don't know how you stand on manipulation, but this shot would, for me, be really improved by cleaning this image up. I would remove the ceiling lights which can be seen through the windows, as well as perhaps the clouds. Then fun could be had with targeted contrast adjustments. Just a suggestion as this image is perfectly fine the way it is! 

Niels Christian Roe
Well seen and observed

Wolfgang Arnold
Chris, Niels, Scott,

many thanks for your comments... @Scott: ...and for your suggestions! I'm trying to balance the modifications: as much as needed but not more than necessary - while I'll probably keep the ceiling lights (I think as -originally- rectangular objects they have their place), I think, I'll retouch the sky (or even crop it).

Holger Stelljes

A marvelous lesson in geometry Wolfgang. I like the tones throughout the image and I agree to only crop the sky, but it's fine as is.

BR, Holger

Wolfgang Arnold

Holger, many thanks for your comment - functional buildings like this one often go unnoticed, but still are attractive to me for their simple and straight architecture.

Fred, I highly appreciate your thoughts and happily take the advice to keep the sky as a "life breath" (a spot on metaphor as it's the only natural element).

Michael, I'm happy about every comment and your's is a confirmation of my thoughts and ideas around this photo - many thanks!

 

Michael Linder
Wolfgang:

Hopefully, I won't simply echo the critiques you've already received.

 

This image is a fine study of form, line, shape, and space.  One reason it works so well because of the tonal range and contrasts, and also the variations of texture.  Another is its simplicity.  

 

Wolfgang Arnold
reflections... ...and shadows.

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