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A lovely portrait. Nicely cropped and captured in b&w. I might try a darker shade of lipstick on the model and filter it so that it stands out a little more. Otherwise this is a great shot.

Many thanks for your comment Benjamin. I am actually posting from a laptop while away from home, so I cannot fully evaluate the subtle differences in tone (I move my head a little and it changes), but I shall certainly have a look at the outline of the mouth that you refer to on my return. 

Interesting composition, nice mood. Good portrait.

I'd increase contrast a little, image looks "gray".

Regards,

Serge

Thank you Serge, I have already answered that point just above.