Evening in the back yard

Evening playing in the back yard.

This is a wonderful image that could be brought up a bit! Hope you like the touch ups. Warm regards.

Your work is so readily identifiable, Steve, straightforward and almost formal but without being in the least sense fussy - the subject central but without that kind of faux natural pose that that always seems so self-conscious.. I must say I much prefer your version to the revision which makes her look less than lifelike. All the delicacy and softness is sacrificed in Jorge's picture. It almost doesn't look like the same girl. Interesting to see two different takes on the same subject so viva la difference

I think it is well done as it is!

 

Cheers

 

PDE

Thank you guys for the comments! Jorge, I do like my version better, but I am glad you stopped by.  We all have our own vision.  Two year olds do not pose, they constantly move about and you have to be lucky to get them to gaze the camera when they are busy!  This was a lucky shot.