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Hello

I think the( I am assuming) post work on her face is overdone especially when compared to her hand. I like the eye contact and pose.

Just my 2 cents

Hi Jenny... I do not know if this is constructive but I will try without sounding too negative I hope...It has its sound qualities for sure...Certainly the model knows how to model and the make up is nice and as a monochrome it is decent enough picture. I do not know why you chose to pose against the rusting cadaver of a truck, since its character seem to clash with her lovely fashion model qualities. I would like to see this model against a different background. As to the tonality, I do not care for it. I personally would show her hands...better i think, try and see if I am right... So guess I am blunt but you may be seeking an honest opinion which is itself to your credit. I have taken a few raps on my portraits...and actually had to pay for the thoughts. This is a good kernel , needed some trimming and you are off in my opinion of course... Good luck.

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I don't want or need someone just to say they like something, I would much rather get an honest opinion. I chose the truck graveyard for it's colors, it's dated appearance, and Im a juxtaposition kind of gal when it comes to models. I agree with the hands. I don't pay enough attention to the details when I get into a shoot, but I should. My aunt calls me a headliner kind of gal, instead of a detail kind of gal... guess I should get more into the details.