Sugar Light

I tried to play with the contrast btween the erotic relationship between the

models and the delicate white light.

I hope it stirs something in the observer.

Gabrielle:  I Love their smoothe skin and creamy look.  The blue hair and tats pull my eyes away and detract from their intimacy. Also, the girl's eyes looking at and head facing me take away from the intimacy.  It also causes you to need extra space on the right that''s just a lot of out of focus negative space.  I think it would be more intimate if the right girl was facing the other looking at her instead.  The attraction seems one way.  The out of focus nails at the edge of the frame are distracting.  It would be exciting if her hand was touching the other girl's hair.  Nice shot.

Nice image of a very pleasant couple.

Thank you Maurizio ^^


Also, a special thanks for you, Alan, for your extensive and detailed critique. I agree with most of the things you say, and I'll try to do better next time :)