hyde 0 Posted February 18, 2015 A fine image, composition, lines and tones, a very apt title. I think I would crop out the bright patch at the bottom, maybe straighten up the various lines? Best regards. Link to comment
dave_dise1 0 Posted February 18, 2015 Tony, I like the simplicity of this image. I also thing the non parallel lines add to the old age feeling of this subject. I may have tried moving the framing down to include more of the ground in front. To me there is either not enough of the ground or it should not be included at all. If needs more balance one way or the other. Link to comment
Tony Brandstetter 814 Posted February 20, 2015 I took your advice Jon and Dave and adjusted the image, a much better product Link to comment
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