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dominicbyrne

Artist: Dominic Byrne;
Exposure Date: 2014:11:18 12:16:31;
Make: NIKON CORPORATION;
Model: NIKON D700;
ExposureTime: 79/1 s;
FNumber: f/16;
ISOSpeedRatings: 100;
ExposureProgram: Manual;
ExposureBiasValue: 0/6;
MeteringMode: Pattern;
Flash: Flash did not fire;
FocalLength: 16 mm;
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 16 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS5 Macintosh;


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Architecture

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Hi Dominic,

I just saw this one after critiquing the other.  They make for a very nice diptych.  Again, great use of form and balance.  I love the milky-ness of the sky with the harsh lines of the buildings. Though both are good, I think the other shot is the more powerful of the two.  On this one i think i would like to see just a bit more of the base at the bottom right.  The building on the left could be dodged/lightened just a bit.  I like the fact that you did not overlap the two buildings but i think you could have just a bit more visual gap between the two.  Keep in mind, these are nit-picks on a very good shot.  Thanks for sharing!

--PatrickD

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