After that day

First " wedding " shot. Regards PK .

It's a good shot, nicely exposed, but I would be careful calling it a wedding shot. It refers to wedding, but it could also be just a commercial or a background picture. I prefer to see the couple, but my overall impression of this one is very good.

For some reason it's quite pessimistic for me & my wife. May be it's the lack of colors, may be the flowers not taken care of. Not a sign of a happy marriage ahead.

It has some kind of sadness in it but I can't exactly tell why do I feel that way. The shoe - just the one reminds me about the Cinderella story:)) So, on the contrary of the previous comments, it should be a fairy tale -like marriage:)) Reagards:)

Splendid shot, one time again!!

While I like this shot, the lighting, and the individual elements you've assembled, in the end, I think you're trying to do too much here. There's just too much going on and my eye just can't handle it.

I think Robert is up to something here but it may have nothing to do with what you are, or were trying to do, but rather with what you didnt do. I think a little burning in at the edges would bring our focus back to the main subject, whereas the way it is now, forces us to scan the whole frame. More specifically: at the top of the frame behind the shoe, and the whole left section of the frame. I also think the flowers need some burning in; especially the mid-lower left one which blends in with the sheet or scarf. The shoes are fine but need a little touching up or cloning at the tip, and the wrinkle on the right shoe is kind of distracting if not cheapish or negligent (as far as presentation goes). Since this is a wedding shot, I think all these issues or nit picks need some attention, as my observation could be the very impression of the client. I think this represents the TRUE events of the day if this is an after the wedding shot. But, most clients are not interested in seeing the battle of the event displayed in their album. Rather, they want to see the love and romance of the day, and this may mean having to do a little extra work to get rid of any imperfections in your product.

I do think the burning is the way to go...it makes me feel like I know how to solve the focal point better. There is generally a tad too much textures ..what I presonally wanted but ..it does not make it easy to look at. It became a bit to heavy generally. That is way mburning wa snever and otion. Well...now I kind of think that it will simplify the way we could aprache the image . which now is as you said all over the place ..good suggestion. thank you . KP .

HI there,I like(as usual)what you`re doing.My only input would be;Where is the garter?? Nice work.S