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I like the balance of light and shadow on your subject. It gives a wonderful gradient along the natural curvature of her body.

The background is a bit distracting though. The frame and what appears to be moulding on the wall pulled my attention away a bit. The moulding can possibly work to your advantage if you use it as a leading line.

Overall a good job. Keep it up!

Thank you for an interesting comment Duy, much appreciated. I fully sympathize that one may not like this approach, but I more often than not photograph my subjects in a natural and familiar setting, which can sometimes give a more candid result than would otherwise be the case, though agreed that distraction should remain at minimum. 

Just beautiful. Well done.

Amazing portrait, John!!!

I agree that you used the light beautifully to enhance a terrific pose. A wonderful collaboration of two creatives.

I don't find the background distracting but I've been following your work for a long time and understand your use of this space.

Wonderful portrait John, the light is perfect and shows her well. Her expression is captivating.