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The red one


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Exposure Date: 2014:08:02 15:24:22;
Make: NIKON CORPORATION;
Model: NIKON D800;
Exposure Time: 1/160.0 seconds s;
FNumber: f/4.0;
ISOSpeedRatings: ISO 200;
ExposureProgram: Other;
ExposureBiasValue: 0
MeteringMode: Other;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 120.0 mm mm;
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 120 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CC 2014 (Windows);


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The mortar in the bricks provide subtle lead-in lines to your model.  It appears that you reduced the redness of the bricks so as not to compete with her red hair--a smart move since all the red attention goes right to her hair.  The green in the background could be a bit strong but her eye color quickly brings my eyes back to her face.  The overall impact of this image is very good.  The only thing I suggest is a little retouching on the whites of her eyes and increasing the color in the iris a bit.  Regardless, your mage is fine, as is.  Nice job.

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Thanks John, your comments are highly appreciate.

You right about the eyes. I did only a bit sharpening, I will correct it.

The bricks and the green I did a bit desaturate. and I blur the bricks.

and a small vignette.

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