single photos Care Free

Would very much like to hear any constructive critiques on how to

improve this portrait. Thanks very much for your time!

Dear friend, after a long time I'm happy to see a new shot by you. Also if at the moment here you have a too much low rate, for me a good work!

Thanks so much Maurizio!

It's a very carefree shot, as the title suggests. Her hair works well and gives the photo personality. Her entire face around her mouth, lower cheeks, and chin is very hot in terms of exposure. It bothers me mostly because it just draws attention to her teeth, and her eyes, on the other hand, which seem quite lovely and expressive, seem out of focus to me.

Fred, Thanks so much for your time and feedback! I very much agree with your comments. In addition to the softboxes on the sides I had a small softbox center below and looking at it now it was too hot. 

Thanks again,

Peter

Nicely Made this IS... I like it!

-r-