Ivy Lee 10-18-13 70

I think it is beautiful Mark!  The hair provides a wonderful textural element as well as framing the model.  Dana...

OK. Indeed beautiful. Working with what we have here, I would like to see the bottom of the frame as a tangent to the bottom of the breast. A crop so that all of her lips were in the shot would have been good too.

If we all took photos the same way, this would be a boring site but I do feel this one would benefit from my suggestion. I would love to hear your take on this.

Dana - Thank you for the comment.

David - Thank you for taking time with this. I agree that more of her lips would have been better but this is the way I made the photograph. I feel the rest was worth that problem. I do also feel that the line on the bottom side of her great needs to be complete and have a little room to breathe, if that makes sense. I'll expand on your comment and say that not only is is good that we all see the nude differently, it is good that all of are subjects are unique. 

Indeed it makes sense. We are all lucky people to know such unique and wonderful people to allow us to photograph them and share these results with others.

Mark.  Just to follow up on some of David's cropping comments.  You could crop out the face entirely and I think it results in a pretty cool (more abstract) image.  Just a thought.  Dana...