On the Move

I like the idea of this and I think the perspective helps make it intersting. The lighting is very nicely captured, especially as you've preserved detail outside the window while still maintaining the energy and look of very natural and elegant lighting, well suited the architecture. It establishes the feel of the space itself very nicely.

OK, on the more critical side, the movement of the two (which is at the heart of the photo) is well captured and it seems the moment is a good one, where they are almost lifted off the ground in motion. But the stairs also being blurry feels like it undermines the photo. It's hard to tell if there was some camera movement or some blur was added in post processing or maybe the focal point was more on the window than the staircase, but I have a hard time looking for too long because it just feels out of focus.

I'll have to look at the original metadata to get a handle on this.  I do understand and appreciate your criticism.

At first blush, it's obvious that the man and his clothing are much sharper than the woman and hers.  I get the feeling that he was my focal point and that I shot the image with the lens wide open.

Later,

michael