LineMartel 6,344 Posted August 17, 2013 Comments and suggestions much appreciated. Thanks, Line Link to comment
limajunior 8 Posted August 17, 2013 Miss Line The feeling of perspective is excellent. The texture almost uniform of the main elements helped highlight the perspective of the photo. All lines converge toward a tree occupying a decentralized position, increasing the effect of the left wall in the perspective that will feel great attraction of the photo. The choice of B&W and the tones of gray also contributed greatly to the prospective effect. It is a photo as well simple, but full of technical concepts that make it an excellent photographic work which focuses on the perspective. Congratulations. Roldao Link to comment
LineMartel 6,344 Posted August 18, 2013 Thank you for taking the time to explain what you think works in this image. it means a lot to me, as it took me a long time to really see this image. I took this shot a year ago and have processed it 3 or 4 times over that time, but could not be satisfied with the results as the earth and rusty tones would compete as well as blend together not giving enough importance to the defining lines. So, today I was going to work on some digital alteration and remembered this photo as I wanted a staircase. When I brought it up on screen I finally SAW it! Before I did photography I did black and white drawings for many, many years... I went back to my roots in art and I am pleased that you like the result.Sincerely, Line Link to comment
masa_otonari 0 Posted August 18, 2013 Very nice image & great capture.Best regards, Masa Link to comment
gunnar1664882369 1 Posted August 18, 2013 Very strong work of composition, Great image. Link to comment
overdiep 0 Posted August 18, 2013 Very nice composition of lines. I like also the tree. Link to comment
Rick Bortnick 2,167 Posted August 18, 2013 Line,Excellent use of leading lines to draw the eye in. Having the tree instead of negative space helps play organic vrs not nicely. B&W was a good choice here for the limited tones you have. Thanks for this one.Rick Link to comment
kirigoi 0 Posted August 18, 2013 Stunning work Line, I'd like to echo the other comments, and also commend you on the excellent control of perspective and other technical aspects of the photo. The B&W conversion also is perfectly suited to the subject matter. I'd have probably made things more contrasty, but I think that the image would have suffered as a result; I will be bearing this in mind as a lesson in the appropriateness of restraint in processing in the future! Thanks so much for sharing, and congratulations again on a superb photo. I'd have very much liked to have seen that journey in processing you mentioned, as the results show a great deal of thought has gone into it. Best wishes, Mark Link to comment
llgarcia 1 Posted August 18, 2013 Well seen, well captured in b&w and beautifully composed. 7/7 Link to comment
LineMartel 6,344 Posted August 18, 2013 Thanks to each of you for comments, I truly appreciate it!Sincerly, Line Link to comment
LineMartel 6,344 Posted August 18, 2013 I think that the initial problem was exactly due to contrast. After converting to BW, it still was not as defined as I wanted. I corrected by reducing shadows and highlights... Link to comment
Vlado 0 Posted August 18, 2013 Excellent graphics and toning, emphasizing your composition! Link to comment
LineMartel 6,344 Posted August 18, 2013 Thank you both for stopping by and for your comments. Much appreciated! Link to comment
gregoryl 0 Posted August 20, 2013 Very strong graphic image with great tones and detail. The tree at the end of the steps really makes this stand out from the many architectural images often seen. Link to comment
hanan_singer 0 Posted August 21, 2013 Great composition,lines sky,tree.....monochrome here is a winner!Regards! Hanan! Link to comment
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