SAN DIEGO JUST AFTER SUNSET

Just returned from a week in San Diego CA. I took a holiday from

photography but did take this shot - could not help myself. I took this

just after sunset from Coronado Island. Used a tripod for the long

exposure. The lighting was like this for only a few minutes just after

the sun set. I took some normal night shots, but liked this lighting the

best.

Critiques, both good and bad, are greatly appreciated. I try to learn

from all comments. I will return the favor for all who contribute their

thoughts.

Hi Dave,

The copper tones provides a wonderful mood for this scenic view of San Diego.

A very nice presentation.

Best Regards my friend, Mike

Dave,

I like the lighting and colors.  Good work.  

It is such a lovely sky  Dave. An excellent capture to remember your 'getaway' by. Well done!

Your horizon is perfectly straight, your exposure is just right, the subject is interesting.  My only recommendation would be to crop the top 5th of sky so that the vast expanse of clouds aren't competing for the viewer's attention.  The wider aspect ratio will add drama to the skyline with the clouds playing a supporting role.  This will place your horizon pretty close to the center of the frame but rules are made to be broken.  I think you should break one.

Mike, thanks once again for providing feedback.

Bill, I always value your thoughts.

Gail, getaways are a spice of life. Thanks for your comment.

Jeff, thanks for your input. Sometimes I am so wrapped up in thinking about whether I should include more sky or water that I forget to consider breaking the rule - thanks for the reminder.