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© Bjorn Carlen 2013

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Artist: Bjorn Carlen;
Exposure Date: 2013:05:22 16:24:03;
Copyright: Bjorn Carlen;
Make: NIKON CORPORATION;
Model: NIKON D600;
ExposureTime: 1/200 s;
FNumber: f/8;
ISOSpeedRatings: 100;
ExposureProgram: Aperture priority;
ExposureBiasValue: 4/6;
MeteringMode: Pattern;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 40 mm;
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 40 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 4.4 (Windows);
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© Bjorn Carlen 2013
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Hello Bjorn

Hanging laundry seems to catch the eye of a lot of photographers. Good color and detail. I might suggest a tweak to the clothes to make them stand out a bit more from the background. I might also suggest a tighter crop. The heads of the people under the umbrella I feel might be better left out the image. I did a quick edit to show what I mean for your consideration, just my 2 cents.
Regards

Greg

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Gregory, thanks for your critique! I really appreciatte it! What exactly do you mean by tweaking the laundry? Making it brighter, selectively, and possibly adding saturation? Not sure if I can do that in LR, but I'll give it a try using u-points in ColorEfex.
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Hi

Yes that's what I mean. It can be done with the adjustment brush in LR or with the Colorefex U point controls. Other ways too but those are the easiest.

Regards

Greg

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