Mary Love (bigger version)

Dear photographers. I would like to know your opinion. Thanks for comments

and ratings. Regards. hen Ry

Notice that the eyes are looking strongly to camera right. If I had photographed this I would think she was looking at herself in the mirror.  The large empty space on picture left fights compositionally with those eyes and their gaze, thus a permanent conflict is undermining your composition.

Jerry

Thanks for your ideas. You have absolutelly right. So i should center the face. Tomorrow I will publish the new version. Many thanks. Regards. hen Ry 

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PDE

I think Jerry has missed his medication again. This is delightful, charming, lovely and quite a few other over used words. Please do not adjust this... I fear it might become boring if you do.

I like the hint of the smile in the eyes.

Beautiful model and great composition. My only comment is that the dress is too bright on her right breast so the details are lost in that area. Still a wonderful portrait. Congrats.

Many thanks for all the comments. The new version will be published soon. Regards. hen Ry