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tub needs either some visible water or water running out of the tap.

In the right-center there is too much distracting images (particularly yellow/red) it moves one's gaze away from the nude and into "what is that yellow thing?".

Since nude is drinking wine replace the conical metal thing and the urn with a bottle of wine (no label) but keep the steel pitcher.

move the white curtain away so as to be invisible, OR show more of it. 

I think Dragsolav has some interesting points. I don't agree with them all. Water would help. I actually like the distraction of the yellow. I am not so keen on the curtain being visible. 

The horizontal seems stronger than the vertical here. As such I would rotate it slightly. (My crop has limitations but I think it is a little better.)

Remove the heavy set make-up .. she is going in the bath. Water would help and the clutter in the corner just a distraction. This is not very good photography its just a photo of a nice looking woman.

Jim, I see that you had a visit from this ingenious critique too!

Love the setting, the wine glass in particular. I must add that even my wife drinks wine occasionally while taking a bath, not to mention my models to whom I always offer some when they stay over. The splash of colour to the right is perfect and the model is absolutely delightful. Bravo to both of you.

Nice composition :)

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A lovely image of a lovely young woman that is and well made too... The image, the image.... naughty boy :=} I think there may be someting said for David's crop there may. But the other two Grumpy Old Men... HA! Jealousy I'm thinking. An old adage that I try to go by is to pay as little attention to those who praise your work as to those that pan it. Work for yourself and move along... Another I love is that 'If you can learn to laugh at yourself, you'll have a lifetime of enjoyment. I'm thinking your two 'admirers' could do with a little laughing at themselves. I sure do  :=}

-r-

Beautiful, Jim!!

I concur that David McCracken's crop improves the image.

Jim Phelps

I agree with the previous points, in particular a bit more care with mise-en-scène and composition (perhaps shooting square on to the edge of the bath so everything isn't on a slope) would improve it. Other than that it's technically good.