2009-10-11_00053

Not quite sure about this one. I can see what you're aiming at - a nice abstract based on the rectangular shape of the window box, with a couple of nice splashes of colour to add interest. But I think the interest is diminished by the large area of white wall to the right hand side of the window box. Maybe try a tighter crop. Also consider applying an effect such as a filter, or popping the colour of the red. Mabe a monochrom with the red areas as spot colour? Lots of options which could turn this into something really appealing.