models: photo shoot Fereshtah @ Queen Elizabeth park Part 2

Best regards Dale!

PDE

Of the two images posted, this is the better.......

She is really into this one, and plays the part well.

As I'm typing this, the image has moved up to just above her arm, and I must admit I prefer the "missing" trelliswork...... just an observation.

How would that pose look, with her looking down the barrel? Really hot.

Regards

Thanks Pierre and Grayham.

@ Grayham, I forgot if I had a shot of her looking down the barrel in this sequence.

Her makeup is way over done and her pose is really unnatural.  That might be what you were looking for, but she is almost uncomfortable looking.

I can't tell what I don't like about the lighting, but there is something strange about the way the light (maybe a off camera flash to the right??) is bouncing off her backside.

Technically it looks like a good sharp image, but the pose, the makeup, the pouty lips I'm just not feeling anything here.

So beautiful and sexy model and job!! Congrats!!

Jennie and Al, thanks a lot for the feedback.

@Jennie, my OCF was on my left and the light coming from the right of the frame is just the sunlight.

WOW! The OFC lighting is great then! 

Thanks Jennie, I will usually see if I can use the sunlight as a rim light or at least lighting up the hair from behind then light the subject's face with my OCF ... I don't see much hair light here but as you noticed, you saw a bit of the sunlight on her back waist.