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Camilo,

 This is a beautiful image and the colors are fresh and exciting.  My one suggestion for improvement is that you divided sky and foreground by placing the dominant rock exactly in the middle.  With that kind of a composition, the viewer's eye is confused and looks up and down wanting one to be dominant.  I took the liberty of making you two variations; one featuring the sky and the other featuring the foreground.

Regards,

Jerry

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Nice clarity, lighting, and colors.  I like the leading lines of the clouds and of the foreground rocks towards the larger outcrop.  I prefer your original to Jerry's suggestions-- the one on the left crops the nice foreground rocks and still leaves the main rock central; the one on the right eliminates the best part of the wonderful clouds and places a heavy rock at the top, which doesn't feel balanced and kills all movement for me.   

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Dear all

Many thanks for your very kind and useful opinions. As Jerry explain and with the examples it present, the 2/3 rule is not followed here, and usually is a very nice heuristic to follow. 

Some times, when you take a image, there some things that make you break rules... I don't know if it is the case, but probably on this photo I didn't want to cut the sky as Jeff explained.. 

I will review the rest of the images of this day for some different compositions.

Other time thanks

 

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