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A QUIET SPOT


jacquelinegentry

Software: Adobe Photoshop CS6 (Windows);


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this is a nice scene.  I would suggest shooting more to your right, to put a distance between the the boat and the land on the right.  Right now the bow touches the shore.  I suggest having the bow, then a little bit of the water, and then the shore.  Cheers, Micheal

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In addition to above, I'd also suggest leaving a bit of space between the boat and the bottom of the frame. A little less cloud will also emphasize the line of mountains in the background. The elements are nicely proportioned. Well done with the contrast and color. Cheers, Steve

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I think this is well composed.  I can see some value, perhaps, in separating the bow a bit from the distant shore, but I think it is more important to maintain the relatively close proximity of the person to the boat; moving to the right would increase that distance, to the detriment of the composition and the main elements in the photo.  I don't mind the bottom of the frame cutting through the bottom of the boat; this photo is about something other than a good or complete representation of the boat.  I like the light on the distant vegetation above the person; it helps me "see" the person but still keeps the attention on the person subdued, as I think it should be.  Very nice work, IMO.

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